yo..
This was a pretty good tune as far as newgrounds music goes. It's pretty good. Beat is pretty good. Vocals aren't mixed that well with the beat. Too loud / crisp, while the beat is too quiet and has too much mid freq's.
Maybe one day you'll grow up to appreciate more than one genre of music. You probably grew up in some broke ass ghetto in south GA so all you've ever listened to in your life is the shitty mainstream rap that played on the radio. You probably don't realize that outside of the ghetto, and especially outside of America, NOT EVERYONE LISTENS TO RAP. Nice job zero bombing four songs in the same genre bro. You'll never be a true producer with a childish attitiude. Don't be a prick and call something 'wack' like a little bitch in high school just cause it doesn't conform to that small box of music you grew up listening to.
Hopefully you just learned something. Don't get mad.